The pictures describe an island named Paradise island in the past and in the present
The two illustrations depict a layout of a site called Paradise Island in the past and another version at the moment
Overall, initially, the site was relatively undeveloped, however, with many renovations, additions and removals, it was converted into a more tourist-oriented area
In the past, the place was largely covered with nature as palm trees were dotted around the center, with rocks found in the northeast and a beach located in the northwest of the island. The infrastructures were primitive when apart from an eastern natural spring and a western scientific research, there left only a small pier with a boat, together situated on the left-hand side of the area
Looking at the present, the aforementioned pier was converted into a big T-shaped one with a cruise ship next to it. The beach reduced in size as there was a swimming area permitted and a new scenic lookout was also constructed to the left of the rocks. Noticeably, the scientific research station was demolished to make way for a new hotel complex with a swimming pool adjacent to it and the hotel was joined with an open restaurant located right in front of a bbq area by a new path. Also, the natural spring was remained unchanged with an additional café behind it and a cycle path was erected to give access to all amenities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e past and another version at the moment Overall, initially, the site was relativ...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aped one with a cruise ship next to it. The beach reduced in size as there was a sw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80088495575 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85223929762 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.543325795 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.0 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.2 22.9334400587 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109534822169 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520760465326 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528784974318 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861784177892 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792960491014 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.2329268293 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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