tpo 65 integrated
The reading and the lecture are both about tuna farming offshore. Whereas the author states that there are some concerns and criticisms about tuna farming and lists out three for support, the lecturer refutes each of the problems. He claims that there are practical solutions to all problems mentioned, which are illustrated in the following essay.
First, the author claims that female tuna fish do not lay eggs in captivity, therefore farmers should hunt many wild young tuna to raise in cages. it will decrease the population of wild tuna. However, the lecturer disputes this idea. He suggests that there is a good solution to this problem. Furthermore, he mentions that by injecting special hormones to adult females in captivity, they will lay eggs; therefore, there is no need to hunt many young from open oceans. In addition, these hormones do not impose any risk to the consumers' health.
Second, the reading argues that farming tuna will be expensive since their highly protein-rich food, produced from smaller fishes, costs a lot. Nevertheless, the professor opposes this argument. He posits that there are cheaper foods produced from special plants rich in protein, therefore, they do not have to produce food from expensive materials. Evidently, cheaper food results in cheaper tuna fish as the final product.
Third, the passage states that in-cage tuna are vulnerable to infestation with a specific parasite that feeds on them. As a result, it weakens fishes, slows down their growth, or even kills them. On the contrary, the lecturer rejects this statement by saying that there is an affordable treatment for this infestation. moreover, he posits that some researches showed that the mentioned blood flukes stop activity in deep waters far from shore. Therefore, by establishing farms in further and deeper regions they can withstand this disease and continue growing.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...many wild young tuna to raise in cages. it will decrease the population of wild tu...
^^
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
... hormones do not impose any risk to the consumers health. Second, the reading argues tha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ordable treatment for this infestation. moreover, he posits that some researches showed ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, whereas, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23432343234 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56525463073 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2837636294 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392826766864 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116294102258 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114002414762 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225707249839 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329444693655 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...many wild young tuna to raise in cages. it will decrease the population of wild tu...
^^
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
... hormones do not impose any risk to the consumers health. Second, the reading argues tha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ordable treatment for this infestation. moreover, he posits that some researches showed ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, whereas, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23432343234 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56525463073 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2837636294 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392826766864 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116294102258 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114002414762 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225707249839 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329444693655 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.