today more people are travelling than ever before.
why is this case?
what are the benefits of travelingfor travelers
The quicksilver-changing of modern day involved the booming of tourism compared to the past. In my opinion, there are two contingent factors that may exert this profound transition of more and more traveling today: technologies and traveling propaganda which I will demonstrate below.
Mirroring the recent decades, the technologism has been applied into the cornerstone of the tourism industry. these can be ranged within varied aspects of traveling accessories: transportation, planning and sustainability. First comes transportation, more innovation in airlines has broadened a spoilt for options to every corner of the world with cheaper pricing and safer encryption. Then technology approaches with tourism infrastructure planning have vouchsafed more disclosed attractions to bring about the ascendancy of travelers. sustainability of localizing and natural landscapes planning also triggered economic growth and urbanization in sparsely populated areas. Seeing the benefits of economic sustainability, governments oft-pose over tourism to avail more tourism to traveling.
Another side of the coin is the propaganda. Rooted from the recreational preference, tourism industry sectors have been exposing more and more fanfare and media attraction to encourage more and more travelers. these include factors of traveling benefits to people's mentality. The craving to expose knowledge of the world, observing the colossal and erotic views of the world or just simply taking a interval to relax or secondment had driven travelers to persevere with traveling to become an indisputable activity in life.
In conclusion, traveling creates lots of benefits for humans and plays a vital role in their life, so it is inevitable that traveling has gained in huge popularity up to now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82509505703 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31744201213 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4732673557 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256283084919 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824420683165 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084657639818 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165278648523 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054458934851 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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