Governments should offer free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
1. Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The author recommends that government should provide free university education to any student who has been admitted to university but are financially weak. I mostly agree with the claim of the author as it prevent the student of merit to dropout or destroy their productive time by working part time. however the method to evaluate the finacial condition should be exhaustive.
Firstly, providing free university education to deserving students is beneficial for the both parties. government will get more skilled manpowers who are likely to earn more and pay more tax to the country . Similarly , student will also have positive attutude toward the government and poilitics. The trust of youths toward thier government is important factor which can be gained by the action suggested here. For example if a student is forced to drop from his university because he is unable to pay his fees, that will have negative effect on not only him but on his entire family. Thus government should make sure that no students with caliber are forced to halt their education.
Secondly, free education assuage sthe economic pressure that the student can face. if a student from a medium income family has to pursue his university education, he should parallely work part time to balance his expenses. The crucial time that student can spend studying should be spend on earning for the living. Moreover, student is likely to get tired and frustated and drop from his universities or his grades might fall. This might cause depresson among the student and may lead to suicide too. As youths are the future of nation. government should make their inestment on the youth .
however , As university fee is expensive , many people might be tempted to prepare the fake financial report to get the free education. government should declare some criterai to determine the financial condition of the student , their family and do the rigorous study of that. Furthermore, a the current perormance of student should also be judged so that they investing on the good hand.
In conclusion , A deserving student who is financially challenged to continue his education should always be supported by the government through rigorous anlaysis of their background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16253443526 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69224463118 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.654050247 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244212983858 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08138873726 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763758762562 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15340528802 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446498617572 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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