The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
The pie chart illustrates comparison of average spending by people for household purposes in a nation over a period of 60 years.
Overall, it was evident that almost three fourth of the people prioritized splurging money for housing in the year 1950 but, the trend saw a drastic reduction with only 22% of the people spending for the same. The expenditure on foods increased to more than thrice in 2010 (11.2% to 34%) which indicates that people begun considering food as their prime need as years passed by.
Furthermore, in 1950 expenditures except housing incorporated only one fourth. The outlay for other purposes and transportation also increased noticeably from 4.4% and 3.3% in 1950 to 19.2% and 14% respectively in 2010. In addition, the expenses for education remained constant over the 60 year period while a mild increase was accounted for healthcare ( from 2.4% to 4.5%)
In conclusion, within this 60 year period, individuals realised that spending money on certain other needs such as food, transportation is equally important as housing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18713450292 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8853945768 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4395821844 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.833333333 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.23603664747 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144286194376 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085469855751 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637937142518 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911892570571 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712309383121 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.