It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Throughout the history of mankind, our civilization has been one of the most precious gifts that living together has bestowed upon human beings. Therefore, humans are always changing their living location "physically" and "emotionally". Keeping this in mind, some people are inclined toward the opinion that living in a city or the country is better than changing our living location, while others may have the opposing viewpoint; they believe that regularly changing our living place is so beneficial. I, personally, subscribe to the second idea rather than the first one for quite a few reasons, two substantial ones of which will be elaborated hereunder.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, by changing our living place, we are able to find new and excellent opportunities in our lives. Sometimes, living in other places creates new opportunities such as good-paid jobs, decent weather, and gaining valuable experiences, which we cannot find in our homeland. There is a famous proverb in my language that says “A person cannot be successful without changing their life location. Water will be polluted if it is motionless." By considering this proverb in our mind, we find out that living in other places gives us a position that it is impossible to find in any book and any advice.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that living in other locations families us about other cultures. In today's hectic life, most of the nations have a great number of conflicts among themselves. Therefore, by means of creating opportunities for living for immigrants and refugees, nations will be aware of other cultures and nations' traditions, and it brings about to reduce the tension between nations. Another important aspect that must be mentioned is that living in other countries and cities may expand our horizons about the world. Let me illuminate my perspective with an example. Before going to the university, I had stayed in my hometown. At the first sight, it was so excellent because some of my duties have been done by my family, but when I went to another city for studying, I knew that doing my duties is so hard, and I had to do my all duties by myself. Thus, living in other places increases the sense of independence and responsibility.
To make a long story short, all of the aforementioned explanations lead us to the conclusion that Living in other places not only creates new opportunities in our lives but also familiarizes us with other cultures, and we will be independent people. Nevertheless, that was a story in a nutshell. Obviously, there are other details, worth mentioning, which are not discussed here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0606741573 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12013712031 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519101123596 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.193267741 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.526315789 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199580299826 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577194890532 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485960992098 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120407795497 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599263785941 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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