Some people think that hard-working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life; other people feel that other factors are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Among people, opinions are divided on whether diligence and persistence are the keys to success or other aspects are of greater importance. Personally, I am in agreement with the latter view, even though the other one also shows some positive aspects.
For some reasons, the option to think highly of other elements is attractive regarding privileged background and appearance. For example, the one who comes from affluent families and receives early childhood education certainly has an advantage over those who have inadequate education. Private capital also plays an important part in the start-ups' process of achieving earlier goals than those without. Additionally, an attractive appearance can help draw more attention and thus get more opportunities in the competitive market. Therefore, wealthy background and appearance are significant factors for achieving earlier success.
However, I believe it is more beneficial to give prominence to diligence and persistence. The reason is that not everyone is fortunate enough to be born into affluent families so effort is of paramount importance. Without privileged background, people must push their limits to reach their aims and industrious, determined ones can have better chances of success. Moreover, huge success will not come easily without persistence. Some famous people are known to attain major success with diligence and tenacity. Thus, hard-working and persistent people are promisingly more successful in the long run.
In conclusion, while other features such as wealth material and appearance offer certain benefits, it strikes me that diligence and determination are the keys to major achievement in life. Not only does it push people to reach their goals, but it also contributes to long-term success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6468401487 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97044399727 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7553145158 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298837280658 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884099820537 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534714620836 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159134898478 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249124314096 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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