“Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits outweigh the problems?”
Nowadays, more and more students are deciding to pursue higher education abroad. While there are some drawbacks to this trend, I firmly believe that the benefits outweigh the problems.
On the one hand, studying abroad allows students to enrich themselves. As students are moving abroad for academic purposes, they choose the best options for them. If such standard courses were available in their motherland, they would not go far to attend the same classes. Therefore, moving outside of the country for higher studies will enable them to have the best learning of their selected topics.
On the other hand, many nations are continuously losing talented residents. It is not unusual that foreign graduates usually settle down there if they get better opportunities in these places. As a result, a nation is gradually dropping the number of talents, which might have a negative impact on its overall development. However, the ongoing problems can be tackled by the government if these degree holders are offered better amenities to get back.
In conclusion, while becoming an international student certainly helps a person to broaden his knowledge, it is consequently minimizing a country’s human resources. Notwithstanding, providing attractive facilities to competent certified pupils could bring them back and let them work for the development of their motherland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45539906103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90847249212 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694835680751 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7418289432 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241528422963 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774030632163 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934080955341 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137148811343 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10809240025 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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