Some people believe that the radio is more enjoyable and practical than TV. Do you agree?
There are several opinions about how they are taking pleasure in listening to the radio rather than watching the television. Personally, I love listening to the radio instead of watching tv to get information about almost everything.
In my opinion, taking the time to just enjoy the sounds that come from a box we call radio is a form of stimulation for the brain to work and give us the opportunity to be more imaginable, therefore we got some brain activity going on. It is a very different case with television, tv does bring all of those imaginations we heard into real motions and that can lead to the lack of brain function and people become lazy because everything that are supposed to be just in our head and kept us wondering, are now shows in a box with screen, not to mention about how the low-quality of the programs are.
Another reason supporting my statement is, in this time of technological advancement, that is impossible to just sit and watch tv all the time, but radio? We have it in almost all the communication devices, we don't have to have internet access for it. It is just more practical than tv, plus now we have YouTube, Instagram, TikTok, and all other video-based platforms for replacing the function of television.
The point is, we take advantage of the things that help us to get the joy of life and can keep up with our fast-moving type of mobility in this era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lmost all the communication devices, we dont have to have internet access for it. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59760956175 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74270309714 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9610235112 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.25 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153861736956 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688388551289 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048333935447 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814440430139 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471946321056 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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