some people choose to eat no meat or fish. they believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. discuss this view and give your opinion
Some people chose a lifestyle (diet) that excludes meat and fish. It is believed that not consuming those things can influence our body’s healthiness.
Years ago, our community were introduced to a certain dietary plan that can be beneficial for our life-span, it is called a vegan life, which reduce eating all type of meats. And I think somehow it make sense since we all know the potential bacteria infection that comes with animals, and there are studies relating to this kind of habit.
No meat nor fish means that they chose to get their food from another source, or as we know it, green food, refer to all the food that acquired from plant-based source, such as vegetables, beans, etc. but when we really think about it, meat and fish are where we obtain our protein, and our body needs protein to survive. And beans can provide it for us. And the added value for this life style is we can support the campaign of sustainable living since we won’t be need another land to store life-stocks. I think part of me support this cause but I still want to eat meats just because they are tasty, and yet I still want to increase my continuity of existence to this world. Luckily this plant-based diet come with several types, and I can still enjoy every meal available on my table as long I keep it real and healthy.
To summarize this topic, I think it is important that we stick to plans where we can lead an enjoyable life even if we have to keep track of things that come into our mouth. You know as they say, there is pain there is gain.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...l type of meats. And I think somehow it make sense since we all know the potential b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, i think, kind of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4350877193 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28863397924 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7067009061 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170342373497 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659668091248 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453279713557 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101073598593 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485146738712 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...l type of meats. And I think somehow it make sense since we all know the potential b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, i think, kind of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4350877193 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28863397924 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7067009061 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170342373497 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659668091248 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453279713557 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101073598593 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485146738712 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.