Should parents physically punish their children?
With the development of society, most children can learn bad things, ranging from online games to violence on TV. There is some argument about whether parents should physically punish their kids. From my point of view, parents should not apply punishment to their kids for three unexpected reasons: destroying child-parent relationships, learning through parental modeling, and being injured.
First of all, when parents apply punishment to children, it may destroy family relationships. It is not difficult to understand that children find it very hard to love someone who usually hits and punishes them, especially the parents who gave birth to them. Moreover, they will be scared of sharing with loved ones. As a result, when they become adults, they will have many symptoms related to mental health problems. It cannot be denied that punishing children will result in some bad things.
Second, children can imitate through parental modeling. Parents who use physical discipline may be teaching their adolescents to resolve conflicts with people around them with physical aggression. For instance, when children go to school, perhaps they can easily conflict with their friends. Those who are victims of domestic violence will certainly use physical actions to handle this problem instead of making excuses. As can be seen, living in a violent family is a toxic environment for kids to become good people in the future.
Last but not least, parents do not know how to apply the right methods of punishment to children, which may cause some potential physical health problems. It is apparent that most parents want their kids to take good actions, but their kids do not understand their wrong behaviors. Therefore, in some unexpected cases, children can be physically harmed by the disciplinary measures of their parents, such as scars and scratches on their bodies. As a result, they will be self-deprecating, shy, and even find it difficult to find real love in the future.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that parents should not apply physical punishment to their children to have no unexpected cases of damage to family relationships, study bad actions from parents, and harm to the child’s body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25069637883 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73813463972 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529247910864 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1225287966 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.722222222 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505964950016 0.236089414692 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166321275449 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131686317307 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318340136161 0.150856017488 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942983318853 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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