In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays, they change their jobs frequently. Give the reasons and your suggestions.
The trend of moving from a job to another is most popular than ever. Despite the fact that the experience of this surely be troublesome and people need to take time to get used to new environments, however, it’s continuously appearing in the rapid flow every year. The causes and solutions will be brought out in this essay.
First of all, the job-hopping frenzy can be attributed mainly to the remarkable social changes taking place nowadays. The upheaval of all aspects of society has no signal to stop which led to the succession of job opportunities generating immensely choices for employees. As a result, people have a tendency to leave recklessly their current job if they find another good one rather than staying in a job like before. On the other hand, employers now place more emphasis on the employees’ outcomes instead of the time they spent in the company that may be turned into the reason why job-hopping is increasing every year.
It goes without saying that some conflicts involved in the workplace and company policies are the causes why job-hoppers move their job. For instance, employees place too many well performances but they don’t get the job advancements or promotions from the boss. Consequently, employees feel unfair as well as don’t want to dedicate their time and effort to the wrong place.
In a word, the fast-changing of all fields makes the employees not spend their whole life in a job when they can get so many job chances outside but we can handle this issue. The HR department and the boss need to take care of their employees more and give them the suitable climbing up in their career and listen to their favors usually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t used to new environments, however, it’s continuously appearing in the rapid flow every year. The cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67544129278 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1702057751 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3111053658 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108224561729 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719942293741 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182590393603 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816419254437 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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