"Tomorrow is the most important thing in our life." However, some people think that the present time is more important. How important is it for individuals and the country to think and do something for the future? What is your own opinion?
Upcoming events or changes in the future are deemed significant to those who are future-oriented, whereas the others state that shifting our focus to the current life is a more considerable option. It is important for individuals to be conscious about their tomorrow lives, however, I would concede that it should be limited to some extent and we should weigh more on the present.
For one thing, the importance of the future should not be neglected in terms of spiritual promotion and psychological security. One thing considered, the upcoming good news or a scenario of physical and mental well-being could offer a sense of comfort for individuals who endure daily suffering in order to maintain a sustainable living. Thinking that all the efforts are paid well would promote and trigger their work enthusiasm to turn dreams into reality. For instance, workers with ambitions of material life quality fulfillment will work hard and cultivate themselves for rewarding positions and in turn, gradually attain their goals. Furthermore, in some situations, the future-oriented pose positive attitudes towards the hardship they encounter and thus enable them to keep wisdom as their mental strength is enhanced by faith in a better future. Travelers who lost their way back will be more likely to find it with patience and belief rather than those who think negatively.
For another, I still think that in the majority of contexts, attention should be driven to the present since it acts as the precursor to any further development. Given the basic foundation for any future outcomes, it requires individuals to be realistic and focus on their progress rather than having an illusion of betterment without conscientiousness and effort. Undoubtedly, it is more reasonable to not imagine any possible scenarios in the future to exert oneselves at the maximum potential for attaining achievements. As a result, when our passion and enthusiasm are kindled, human’s internal abilities will gradually reveal and allow people to acquire the ostensible impossibilities. By way of illustration, athletics will not succeed without training and just dreaming of glory about reaching the pinnacle of sport.
To conclude, to be conscious about the future is important to some extent. However, I believe that being present-oriented is more important for any good outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... future are deemed significant to those who are future-oriented, whereas the others sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35924932976 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06057036729 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571045576408 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0007407342 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.266666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283305557178 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099040292907 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637938939845 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198479414157 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455372773962 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.