"Tomorrow is the most important thing in our life." However, some people think that the present time is more important. How important is it for individuals and the country to think and do something for the future? What is your own opinion?
Upcoming events or changes in the future are deemed significant to those who are future-oriented, whereas the others state that shifting our focus to the current life is a more considerable option. It is important for individuals to be conscious about their tomorrow lives, however, I would concede that it should be limited to some extent and we should weigh more on the present.
For one thing, the importance of the future should not be neglected in terms of spiritual promotion and psychological security. One thing considered, the upcoming good news or a scenario of physical and mental well-being could offer a sense of comfort for individuals who endure daily suffering in order to maintain a sustainable living. Thinking that all the efforts are well-paid would promote and trigger their work enthusiasm to turn dreams into reality. For instance, workers with ambitions of material life quality fulfillment will work hard and cultivate themselves for rewarding positions and in turn, gradually attain their goals….
For another, I still think that in the majority of contexts, attention should be driven to the present since it acts as the precursor to any further development. Given the basic foundation for any future outcomes, it requires individuals to be realistic and focus on their progress rather than having an illusion of betterment without conscientiousness and effort. Undoubtedly, it is more reasonable to not imagine any possible scenarios in the future to exert oneselves at the maximum potential for attaining achievements. As a result, when our passion and enthusiasm are kindled, human’s internal abilities will gradually reveal and allow people to acquire the ostensible impossibilities. By way of illustration, athletics will not succeed without training and just dreaming of glory about reaching the pinnacle of sport.
To conclude, to be conscious about the future is important to some extent. However, I believe that being present-oriented is more important for any good outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... future are deemed significant to those who are future-oriented, whereas the others sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41139240506 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10645393991 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5621015352 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297463078965 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107333047949 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645229015318 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199785619522 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449693280942 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.