"Tomorrow is the most important thing in our life." However, some people think that the present time is more important. How important is it for individuals and the country to think and do something for the future? What is your own opinion?
Upcoming events or changes in the future are deemed significant to those who are future-oriented. However, others state that shifting our focus to the current life is a more noteworthy option. It is important for individuals to be conscious about their tomorrow lives, however, I would concede that it should be limited to some extent and people should weigh more on the present.
For one thing, the magnitude of the future should not be neglected in terms of spiritual promotion and psychological security. One thing considered, the upcoming good news or a scenario of physical and mental well-being could offer a sense of safety and comfort for individuals who endure daily suffering in order to maintain a sustainable living. Imagining that all the efforts are well-paid would promote and trigger their work enthusiasm. For instance, workers with ambitions of material life quality fulfillment will work hard and cultivate themselves for rewarding positions and in turn, gradually achieve their goals.
For another, I believe that in the majority of contexts, attention should be driven to the present since it acts as the precursor to any further development. Given the basic foundation for any future outcomes, it requires individuals to be realistic and focus on their progress rather than having an illusion of betterment without conscientiousness and effort. Undoubtedly, it is more reasonable to not imagine any possible scenarios in the future in order to exert one’s selves at the maximum level for attaining achievements. As a result, when our passion and enthusiasm are kindled, human’s internal abilities will gradually reveal and allow people to acquire the ostensible impossibilities. By way of illustration, athletes will not succeed without training and just immersing themselves in glorious illusions of reaching the pinnacle of sport.
To conclude, to stay conscious about the future is important to some extent. However, I believe that being present-oriented is more important for any good outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... future are deemed significant to those who are future-oriented. However, others state ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45886075949 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09631968014 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7408962728 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260405996192 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09064310483 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660210262113 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185407370029 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698149992414 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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