The diagram details the process of making leather products.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
As we can see in the diagram it decipts how leather products are made for retail or human use. It has a total process from eight up to eleven steps. From an overall perspective look, it is apparent that the process starts from the first step which is drying and its a hand-made process, and it ends with the production of useful and consumer products.
first, the animal skin or leather is dried under the heat by hanging it on a rope. After that, It get transport to the factories using the trucks. Subsequently, the animal's skin gets cleaned by washing them in a tank full of water and lime substance. Afterwards, the animal skin gets smotthed by a flattened machine by having it under a big roller.
In the upcoming step, the flattened skins gets soaked in tannin tank, which includes water and vegetable matter. Furthermore, a small roller serves to color or polish the leather. At the end of this process the products gets transferred to another factory where leather and animal skin goods shuch as pants, bags and shoes are forged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...from the first step which is drying and its a hand-made process, and it ends with t...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ction of useful and consumer products. first, the animal skin or leather is dried un...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...by hanging it on a rope. After that, It get transport to the factories using the tr...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46593042368 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0213900287 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113162598491 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443394991249 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438636039211 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782805867509 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045139206473 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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