News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
Television and news are usually controlled by editors as they have the upper-hand on what should be shown, seen or heard. This essay will first look at several elements which might affect their decisions, then outline the public preference, whether people, currently, get used to bad news or prefer to hear only what makes them happy.
According to what is happening around the world, those who sit behind cameras can’t show precisely every single detail as it might cost them their channel reputation. Additionally, money is an essential aspect which couldn’t be neglected by news editors for its importance. Regardless, what’s going on around the whole world, news, ordinarily, tends to display what attracts our society members attention, and make them earn some money, even if it would hurt others’ feeling as they won’t care for anything except money. Consequently, employees like editors, meanwhile, are choosing specific events to be shown as well as particular articles to be printed.
Furthermore, although it is always better to hear good news, truth is necessary to maintain balance among our nation because if people got used to hear solely lies, productivity wouldn’t be expected by any means. Also, broadcasting reality could help in investigating causes and detecting some solutions for our global issues. Living a lie won’t be beneficial to anyone including those who work in media field. So, editors must be factual about the news in addition to articles they are editing, even if the society couldn’t give them encouragement, they must keep delivering real incidents.
As previously stated, more than one factor can affect our programs such as the financial side along with the channels’ and journals’ reputation. Notwithstanding, these factors shouldn’t deviate the reality or encourage people to live within a lie. Unfortunately, our world might be full of severe incidents, nonetheless, people should face them and find reasonable solution instead of hiding behind cheerful news and optimism. Gradually, instead of getting bored of war news, our society will be able to analyze and co-operate with the government to resolve the problems which cause the bad news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to hear only what makes them happy. According to what is happening around ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as particular articles to be printed. Furthermore, although it is always b...
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'includes'.
Suggestion: includes
...ing a lie won’t be beneficial to anyone including those who work in media field. So, edit...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y must keep delivering real incidents. As previously stated, more than one fa...
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Line 7, column 460, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...optimism. Gradually, instead of getting bored of war news, our society will be able to a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38328530259 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84407818792 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654178674352 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9157407987 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27154593351 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874348507534 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553928344759 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166430701544 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373746551379 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.