Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that people of the modern era are bombarded with numerous choices in their lives. I completely agree with this point of view because of the following reasons.
The prevalence of options is first demonstrated in the commercial field. Specifically, many shopping centers offer shoppers a wide range of various products, ranging from clothing to cosmetics. As a result, these customers would have to contemplate which items to make a purchase for a long period. Additionally, even when people shop on online platforms such as Shoppe or Amazon, online brands still offer them an enormous number of products, along with discount vouchers of varying values to encourage them to buy what is introduced.
Second, the educational field also witnesses a hike in the number of choices available. For example, parents today can choose to send their children to many state schools or private schools within their neighborhood to receive a well-rounded education. They can alternatively tutor their children at home following the homeschooling method if they have confidence in their pedagogical abilities. Furthermore, students have trouble in choosing which university to apply to after they have graduated from high school. This happens because of the vast number of universities that appear to have the same quality, and specialize in almost similar majors. As a result, these students might have to spend a lot of time comparing their options before making the final decision of where to study.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the statement. The commercial and educational fields are two prime examples to show that people are presented with an excessive number of choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32835820896 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89593588369 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3474224454 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138420062978 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459666366043 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307785791041 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837922305907 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269058382413 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.