Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
Most parents buy a lot of toys for their children, the advantages of this is that kids can learn something from toys,however, it has drawbacks, such as a rapid loss of interest in toys because of having too many of them.
To begin with advantages, currently, we have many kinds of toys, which can teach children to read,write,count. For example, the toy book can help children with learning letters, also with reading. Toy board may interest children to writing or counting. The toys like robots and dolls, that can speak , may aid with speaking also it increases children's outlook. Nowdays most of children are learning how to write, read, count, speak with the help of modern toys, that is high adbantage of having too many toys.
On the other hand, when child has a lot of toys , he or she loses interest to toys quickly. When child has too many toys he or she undestands that their parents will buy them new one because of that kid is not interested in old play items. For instance , father bought new play item for his child , but after one day his child asks about new one , because he does not want to play with old toy and parents should buy new one.
All in all , i would have to say that with help of modern toys kids can improve their outlook but parents should not buy too many play item for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46473029046 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34372046524 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510373443983 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4582974832 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355212992183 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165167642089 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073550281119 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242192631521 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510675121711 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.