Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think that its advantages would outweigh its disadvantages?
Some educators suggest that teenage students should participate in the international student exchange program. In my opinion, it can bring both beneficial and negative effects on youngsters.
On the on hand, joining in programs organized to find the appropriate candidates for studying in other countries in the short time is the opportunity for teenagers to enhance and widen the knowledge. It is immutably true that learning in the international education environment is the valuable experience for students in adolescence to acquire knowledge from teaching methods of a new country. For instance, Vietnamese students can be members of the oversea exchange programs to the United Kingdom which is well known for the global top ranking education system. As the result, they may expand their horizons and learning more effectively.
On the contrary, studying abroad at the early ages may be the difficulty for a number of students. Due to their immature life experience and independence ability, they may have problems regarding adapting and commucating when living in a completely new environment. One clear example is studying in America which country famous for the racism. Teenage students from Africa may be discriminated against and viewed with negative eyes which are overwhelming for their age. Therefore, they may have various metal health problems such as anxiety disorder, depression, which take a long time to overcome.
To sum up, although oversea exchange programs for adolescents brings them the cognitive development, I personally believe that it also impacts negatively on students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5406504065 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02663228812 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.294453712 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177610360794 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695281647257 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716442087589 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118716633423 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642654318998 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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