Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’
How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Over 3 decades, the number of people who possess cars has grown seriously, which leads to the greatest term: ‘congestion’. Hence, governments must take actions to bring in enormous emergency measures to control this menace.
To begin with, as car ownership rises, people gradually become more dependent on those private vehicles due to the freedom while traveling, which means this demand only continues to increase, not the reverse situation. As a result, it is obvious to witness the large amount of cars, which all cause the traffic to be congested all the time.
The most effective approach that governments can consider is encouraging private enterprise to install underground rail tracks for electronic trains. people have no motivation to utilize public transportation because of the incoherent schedules and the lack of transports. Therefore, investing in those areas may stimulate pedestrians to avoid using their own vehicles. Notwithstanding, putting a higher tax on parking, in Japan, for instance. A car can cost 1 million yen, however, parking can value to 1,600 yen a day, which means the money you pay for a year is a half of car price, not including petrol fee. Since then, the Japanese have transferred to walking or using buses, trams,...
To sum up, I perfectly believe that congestion exists due to tremendous privately owned cars on the streets. Nevertheless, national and local authorities are able to do a lot to minimize the use of cars to tackle this trendy problem.
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- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
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Suggestion: , .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, may, nevertheless, then, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98464290636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695473251029 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3590493452 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219384657205 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648219374891 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431934749785 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122065663418 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251310880191 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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