The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants.
"Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the south-western United States. This change, however, has had little impact on our customers. In fact, only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that an average of 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
Companies tend make operational changes in their products or services occasionally to increase the profits and gains. The changes that are beneficial not only to the company’s gains but also to the consumer is proved to successful in the market. The one that are made only with consideration of company’s gains often fail to meet consumer demands and ultimately lead to the downfall of the organisation.
In the memo, the restaurant made a smart choice by replacing butter with margarine with has higher health benefits compared the butter which can lead to increased cholesterol levels in the body. These promotional change proved to be successful in their food houses as the most of the customers couldn’t tell apart the difference between butter and margarine.
The trail of these change has run only in the southwestern branches of the restaurant to see if the change would lead a dissatisfaction in the customer. It’s one of the sharp move by the pancake house to see how their changes will be able to get a word in their regular customers. Sometimes the restaurant make new promotional offers and changes throughout their whole flagships without a trail run which can be quite to their businesses.
Though the result might not be too predictable since the swap that has been made in the food is not only advantageous to the consumer’s health but also is more profitable to the restaurant. This kind of additions is essential for the successful business in the restaurant community.
The taste and quality of the food are the two major aspects that affect the excellence of a restaurant. A food business that can be able to not only prioritise their self pockets but also the customer’s satisfaction will truly succeed to thrive in the competitive field.
Though aspects that are impossible to prevent like disapproval from few customers that unimpressed with the transparency of the restaurant, it should be able to satiate their needs through additional perks and promotions to keep the business engaged.
If the changes in a business that is able to make the amends and meet the required milestones that are both favourable to both customers and their profits, it is safe to make those changes.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Out of topic.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 370 350
No. of Characters: 1810 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.386 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.829 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.63 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.719 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...engaged. If the changes in a business that is able to make the amends and meet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 369.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05149051491 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93235952485 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471544715447 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.342917847 57.8364921388 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 119.503703932 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 23.324526521 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.70786347227 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149179180242 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542929584917 0.0743258471296 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420283170906 0.0701772020484 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681168927074 0.128457276422 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503867803742 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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