Children these days behave more impolitely than children fifty years ago.
Some people claim that children nowadays are acting more terribly than children fifty years ago, while others think the opposite. As for me, I believe that children these days are behaving badly due to three reasons mentioned below.
To begin with, children nowadays are taught the importance of critical thinking, so they will act more rudely than children in the past. To be more specific, my niece once shouted at my aunt for forcing him to wear female uniforms to school because she considered herself to be a man. Similarly, my nephew also refused to wear uniforms because he thought that wearing them violates freedom of expression. As a result, my uncle and aunt always tell me that their kids are recalcitrant. On the other hand, children in the past are taught to obey authorities, so my father could not criticize his teachers or principals if the school told him to wear uniforms. Evidently, children these days think more critically than kids in the past.
In addition, children these days care more about reputation, which means that they would act impolitely to defend their reputation. Take my professor's son as an example. My professor's son once got a C on his math final exam, and my professor scolded him for not studying hard. Nonetheless, his son broke down and yelled back at his parents for portraying him as an unintelligent person. Moreover, he even questioned whether his parents like him or not. Contrarily, my grandfather always condemned my father for getting A- on his English test, but my father ignored their criticism all the time because he didn't think it is a big deal. Apparently, kids nowadays indeed care more about getting a favorable image than kids born in the 1970s.
Last but not least, modern young people place more emphasis on friendship than parental relationships, so they will undoubtedly behave more impolite to their parents. For example, my friend's daughter made several friends in her school, so she tends to believe whatever her friends said and choose to ignore her parents. To be more specific, my friend once told her not to eat pizza dropped onto the ground, but she dismissed my friend and yelled at him that food accidentally dropped on the ground for less than 5 seconds is still edible, all because her friends said so. Nonetheless, my aunt listened to every sentence that my grandmother said. Thus, whenever she dropped her food unintentionally, she did not pick it up and eat it. Obviously, kids in the past indeed listen to their parents more, but kids nowadays pay more attention to their friends.
In conclusion, I maintain that children these days indeed behave more horribly than children years ago. After all, kids these days care more about critical thinking, reputation, as well as their friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 606, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...their criticism all the time because he didnt think it is a big deal. Apparently, kid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, similarly, so, still, thus, well, while, after all, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94658119658 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6519659373 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504273504274 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8983729565 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.652173913 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.39130434783 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330243608023 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119285503913 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167571331008 0.0737576698707 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280918213925 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191501078786 0.0645574589148 297% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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