Today family members do not eat meals together. Is it a positive or negative trend.
In this modern era of technology every human being are mostly taking their daily food alone because of their life style. i think that it is a negative trend, because it will effect health issues and family love . i will discus it in details.
Many people believe that these days majority of people do not sarve their meals together, because of which many people are facing health problems, because of eating fast food such as, burgers , pizza, fried meat etc. For example in Poland 33 thousand cases has been reported of different health issues in last 11 months, because in Poland 83% people used to eat alone without family and they order food from different restaurant which takes less time more over while looking at this problem Polish government to a good step they makes a rule that every person can order meals from restaurant only 3 times a week so they can enjoy their made food along with their family.
In addition effects of this is also on love bonds of every family, where every one fails to maintain their love life, because not having dinner or lunch together hurt every family . For instance in 2018 survey in uk proofs that children between 14 to year age, who were mostly used to take their meals with their friend out of home were not in a good relation with their family and after getting teen age they used to leave their homes because of lack of love from their loved ones. Government's must look forward to this issue to save more families.
To sum up all most every person did not eat food with their family, which is a negative trend and outweighs positive trend. I think having meals together will boost love and care between families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59932659933 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02539433746 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.930712192 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16190928288 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748083370486 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720323282617 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124578536548 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814888141883 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.