The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first line graph depicts fluctuations in the percentage of families possessing electrical devices in one particular nation, whilst the second indicates the amount of time spent on cleaning. All the figures given were from 1920 to 2019.
At the first glance, we can observe that all the three factors mentioned in the first chart experienced upward trends, whereas the opposite was true for the figure in the second one. Although there were no households using refrigerators in 1920, the great majority of dwellers owned fridges and vacuum cleaners in 2019.
Looking closer, the percentage of houses taking possession of refrigerators dramatically rose from 0 percent in 1920 to approximately 90 percent in 1960. Following that, it speeded down a bit and climbed at a steady rate until reaching its peak in 1980. This figure remained constant at 100 percent until the last year of the period of time shown. Besides, the proportion of claim ship of vacuum cleaners sustainably increased over the first 60 years, from 30 percent in 1920 to 90 percent in 1980. In the next 20 years, this figure showed its continuous upward trend when all families use vacuum cleaners in 2000 and stayed unchanged to 2019. Beginning with the highest point among all three categories, the percentage of washing machines owned, however, came in last in 2019. Between 1920 and 1960, this figure went up from 40 percent to 70 percent before declining to about 65 percent in 1980. During the remaining time, it rose with moderate speed and reached its peak at around 75 percent in 2019.
In 1920, there were half of a hundred hours spent on cleaning every week, but by 1980, this number dramatically dropped to only 15 hours. Following, it stabilized for the 20 remaining years, after which it fell continuously to slightly above 10 hours per week in 2019.
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- In class you have been discussing the statement Old members should be looked after by the members of their family or it is better for them to live in nursing home Your teacher has asked you to write an essay express your own opinion 73
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 84
- In class you have been discussing the statement Old members should be looked after by the members of their family or it is better for them to live in nursing home Your teacher has asked you to write an essay express your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... 100 percent until the last year of the period of time shown. Besides, the proportion of claim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, look, second, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 310.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94838709677 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61476636083 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 106.607317073 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0710749629 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159158838165 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564272043861 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380018803837 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109048147066 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500236267366 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.