The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
It is argued that computers are the most indispensable thing invented by humans within the last hundred years. From my perspective, I genuinely agree with this opinion. This essay will pen down valid support for my verdict.
Initially, I opine that computers greatly benefit social creatures by allowing them to multitask. Computers are developed to possess the capability of running a plethora of algorithms simultaneously, thus performing many programs at the same time. Consequently, working equipped with computers would be efficient and time-saving. For example, users can read newspapers and listen to the radio within a few clicks on the computer during the same time, which saves a considerable amount of time. By contrast, a printed newspaper or a radio could only do its sole function - just providing propaganda or entertaining audiences.
Besides, I hold a strong belief that the computer brings about profound convenience to people in terms of convenience. This is mainly derived from the fact that despite having been hugely born, computers are now resized to be more varied and smaller. As a result, these devices could be brought along virtually anywhere, even the most remote corners of the world. Take, the HP minibook, for instance. This type of computer, which was created by the same company, has a similar size to a textbook at secondary school. Therefore, it does not take up much space. Were the computers to be as big as TVs, their significance would be curbed. Moreover, in the past, people only could carry and share limited numbers of heavy books; however, nowadays computers allow students to share hundreds of documents within a short time without wasting any physical energy.
In conclusion, as for the aforementioned explanations, I concur that computers are the most imperative invention within the last centuries because of their multitasking ability and convenience.
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- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The table shows the changing value which China achieved by exporting five types of goods over the two years of 2009 and 2010 measured in billion dollars 10
- Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people Do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that printed books are not necessary for the digital era because all writing can be stored electronically Others think printed books still play an important role Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32343234323 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95720391059 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650165016502 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8854743751 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8823529412 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0113471223526 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00358741741573 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00983851372181 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00507672716051 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00879314937816 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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