People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teachers are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?
People have different views on the definition of success. Some people argue that those who can earn a huge amount of money will be the most successful, while the others think this practice will be true to people who have social occupations. This essay will shed light on these two aspects before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the people who are prosperous in money will become the most successful. Firstly, the sufficiency of daily life can be ensured by money. In other words, money is the key for family expenditures, which give the people all the amenities. Especially, children can be received good education with a scientific and modern learning environment. Furthermore, the daily life has a tendency to be more comfortable without food deficiency and necessary commodities. Secondly, the rich people are prone to be more relaxed about financial situation. Instead of worrying about paying household expenses off, they spend time enjoying the life with many entertainment activities.
On the other hand, the opinion that those working for society should be the most successful also stand to reasons. Those people have to be strictly trained to become qualified with their professions, which raise a common thought for almost people is that these occupations are stable, which can bring for them enough money and well-known reputation. Not only that but they are also become admirable due to the demanding jobs for thinking and patience.
Both sides examined, I find it hard to completely affirm who will be the most successful. As far as I am concerned, the success of someone cannot be defined based on their income or occupations, but the level of success will be determined by the way they live and enjoy the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05782312925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75947624541 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2358620824 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229797692424 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819853016027 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809140272615 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150132813836 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296258843616 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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