Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Even though advertisements are believed to play an essential role in attracting buyers, many claim that the popularity of advertising also results in the disregard of customers. For me, it is true that the widespread advertisements don’t attract our attention as they used to do; however, it is also undeniable that advertising aids in maintaining the good reputation of brands and customers’ positive perception of them.
On the one hand, employing advertising in marketing seems to help improve the number of buyers. Thanks to advertisements, customers can gain an insight into the merits of products being promoted and then make decisions as to whether to buy them or not. To illustrate, at the current times, advertisers are considering social media such as YouTube to be potential platforms, and for this reason, encountering dozens of advertisements whenever you are surfing YouTube is not something abnormal. I notice that if any promotion is repeated too many times, I will bear it in mind and somehow have a more positive perspective toward the product.
On the other hand, that more and more advertisements appear somehow leads to the neglect of the majority of customers. One particular reason for this, I suppose, might lie in the fact that people are occasionally interrupted while they are watching their favorite videos or are enjoying their time on social platforms. This is undeniably irritating and discomforting. Over a period of time, people can become more and more indifferent, and rather than purchasing the products, they would be prone to skip ads and show their hatred for them. Take my experience as an example. During my time on YouTube, I have always been disturbed by 2 or more ads in just one video, and to be honest, this appears to be quite upsetting.
All in all, the excessive promotions of a product can bring in customers’ inattention, yet it is also a catalyst for spreading the brands’ prestige and improving how customers perceive its products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...an essential role in attracting buyers, many claim that the popularity of advertising also...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... being promoted and then make decisions as to whether to buy them or not. To illustrate, at t...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ly irritating and discomforting. Over a period of time, people can become more and more indiff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, while, as to, i suppose, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11009174312 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0985852777 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1304650807 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112989329654 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389969917273 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373069349604 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643307711688 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430860492146 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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