You have found a problem with an item which you bought online. Write a letter to the company manager
.In your letter, you should:
· describe the item
· explain the issue
· suggest what you expect the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complaint about the product which I have brought from your electronic store last Friday.
I have a bought a latest Samsung Smartphone S11 Note pro from your shop. Plus, I have received a complementary Bluetooth wireless earphones which are also known as earbuds with the item that I had purchased from your store. However, the earbuds are unable to connect with any of the mobile devices including the new mobile device that I have purchased on last Friday.
Besides, the wireless charger case of the earbuds are non-functional as they are unable to charge earbuds as well themselves from the cable. I think that I had received a defected complementary product which required to be replaced as per the guarantee mentioned in the invoice slip. Therefore, I would request you to provide me a replacement order as early as possible because without earbuds it is really tough for me to do multitasking work while taking to people on phone. Besides, I am a fond of listening to music during my workouts which I do listen only from earbuds. My old earbuds have been lost and this is the only reason I am expecting you to resolve my issue soon.
I am hoping to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complaint ab...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... store last Friday. I have a bought a latest Samsung Smartphone S11 Note pro ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, really, so, therefore, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78538812785 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68707397513 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2618868689 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199356795309 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730531235771 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479932578201 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124009292984 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00904576002913 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.