Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author claims that knowing the past or what happened in the past will not be beneficial when making important decisions which I strongly disagree with the claim. Decisions are mostly made basically from past experiences. The reasons for not supporting this claim are based on three major things.
Firstly, knowing about what happened in the past situation will help make one to make a good decision concerning the present situation. For instance, vaccines of HIV /AIDS which was once tested on South Africans years back caused a detrimental effect instead of being immunity to the virus. This occurrence , can affect one’s decision on vaccination. It will help a country or an individual to do more research of any vaccinations of virus.
Secondly, organizations or companies tend to make good decisions based on past experiences or past decisions. They tend to consider the most of the mistakes that they did that did not help the company to grow or to make profits. This is mostly called end of year review. This review help the company to be able to detect what went wrong and what decisions they made in the past that was beneficial or that was not beneficial. This practice enables the company to track the performance of every individual in the company.
Also, among married couples, knowing about each other’s past life will help keep their marriage.
Once, the couple is aware of what happened in the past lives of each other it will prevent disagreements among them. For instance, knowing the family history of each other will help them understand each other and live happily which will prevent them from divorcing.
In conclusion, one must realize one past mistakes to be able to make good decisions. One may agree with claim that knowing the past will not help in decisions making because sometimes past experiences can undermine one’s ability to do something. However, knowing about the past makes us stronger.
Therefore, this made me disagree on the author’s claim that, knowing the past will not help in making good decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pened in the past will not be beneficial when making important decisions which I ...
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...ecisions are mostly made basically from past experiences. The reasons for not supporting this cl...
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...e one to make a good decision concerning the present situation. For instance, vac...
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...g about each other’s past life will help keep their marriage. Once, the couple i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02623906706 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60659707212 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472303206997 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.51725519 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7368421053 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212359008117 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076683200657 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560621353539 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121171450056 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445257539621 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.