Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A large number of people engage in seemingly dangerous activities, such as bungee jumping and mountain climbing. This essay will analyse the reasons behind this phenomenon and illuminate my viewpoint as to whether this phenomenon represents an auspicious or ominous tendency.
There are mainly two reasons for people to participate in such sports. The dominant reason is that people need to alleviate their tiredness and pressure deriving from work and study by taking part in exciting activities that help them temporarily get away with the sense of boredom and anxiety. The activities fulfilling this purpose are extreme sports that challenge people's athleticism and courage, thus giving people a sense of excitement and satisfaction. Another factor driving people to participate in extreme sports is that participants are protected by rigorous safety measures, as exemplified by high-quality equipment and well-trained staff members monitoring the operation of such activities. Given such all-round safety measures, people may have fewer risks of injuries.
As far as I am concerned, I opine that this phenomenon represents a positive trend since it helps to reduce people's stress and boredom, and is not as dangerous as it seems in light of the reassuring safety measures. Admittedly, participation in extreme sports still causes concerns among people who are not familiar with such sports and therefore, worry about the safety issue. However, these concerns may disappear as people increasingly understand the high level of safety protection in extreme sports.
To sum up, participation in extreme sports is driven by the need for alleviating negative emotions and satisfactory safety protection. Personally, I hold that this phenomenon represents an auspicious trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of people engage in seemingly dangerous ac...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... phenomenon and illuminate my viewpoint as to whether this phenomenon represents an auspiciou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6282527881 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02367856771 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7339673878 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214654566474 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864016385126 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395529293287 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130212409831 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420278278666 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.