Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undoubtedly true that extreme activities are becoming increasingly crowd-pleasing in the modern era. In the other words, several people around the world are surprisingly attracted to hang-gliding, mountain climbing, and parachuting, to mention but a few. In my opinion, the reasons for people to risk their lives in such a way are varied and although it is quite risky, this can be considered an acceptable tendency.
There is a variety of rationalizations for the aforementioned hazardous trend. First and foremost, extreme activities fulfil people with a felicitous feeling that ordinary entertainment never could. Most extreme sport enjoyers are adrenaline junkies and they are literally addicted to the natural drug that their bodies synthesize during dangerous activities. In the second place, people are taking part in these danger-some activities in order to overcome and conquer their phobias and fears. These sports, they believe, will free them from their inner fear, boost their confidence and make them intrepid.
Despite their intimidating appearance, extreme sports can be considered a positive trend. To begin with, extreme sports can boost the economy as it attracts a large number of tourists and even locals who want to try adventurous games. Consequently, the country's economy will properly surge with the development of tourism. For instance, hang gliding makes Ha Long Bay's tourism one of Vietnam's main economic sources. Furthermore, these extreme activities should be supported as it also ameliorates local living standards in terms of enhancing employment opportunities. By the way of illustration, the locals can be trained to be a guilder or help the participants with their personal protective equipment.
In conclusion, people are excited to undertake extreme activities due to the fact that they are adrenaline junkies or as a result of their belief that these sports will help them get ahead of themselves. Then, extreme sports can be considered a positive trend as it helps boost the national economy as well as establish more careers for the locals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, second, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, by the way, in my opinion, to begin with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44171779141 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05157222441 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8700091269 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209642757649 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670258329203 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411171437184 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134570714443 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444684427057 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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