In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays, accommodation plays a central role in people's life in all countries. While in some nations people are paying more attention to buying a house, in some other nations it is not a big deal to have a house of your own. The importance of owning a home in some countries comes from some causes, which lead to negative effects.
First of all, finding a comfortable home to rent is not easy and also not possible all the time. Secondly, in countries with an unstable economy, the rate of both rent and deposit are dramatically increasing, which is a big obstacle to finding an appropriate home for rent. Finally, people who do not have a house, should move frequently even more than one time a year. Therefore, over those movements from house to house, their equipments may cause damage or even be lost.
Regarding all negative sides of renting a house, the tendency to own a house has some disadvantages, as well. When the majority of the people want to buy a home for themselves, it will lead to a sharp increase in the price of a home, which is the reason of houses have turned into an asset like gold in some countries. For example, in my country having a home has become an important condition for marriage, so almost all the population wants to buy a home soon or later. Thus, this tendency has caused a rapid increase in price in home marketing.
In conclusion, ownership of a home is a trend in some countries which has happened because of some issues about renting a home. Therefore, this willingness to buy a house leads to some problems in those countries.
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- TPO 53 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...The importance of owning a home in some countries comes from some causes, which lead to n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60638297872 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6880298083 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524822695035 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6555108712 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298036679807 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109632802755 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515015016807 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189792373529 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222383258267 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.