The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every country wants its place in developed country, since we are living in a interconnected world, hence it is require to thing every country consider itself as developing country.Hence all parents to its kids, or teachers to all students expectation is to grow in every field not only in buisness but moraly also.
yes, every person wants to see himself as a succesful business man but a a real succesful person is the one who is ascetic.But, in this competitve world if anyone has to survive, they have be innovative and competitve.
Firstly, to be succesful in a any industry , it is neccesary to be cooperative.People get the fame once they become successful but if they are not showing the good ethics then any successful achievement might not work for them.It is difficult to live a ascetic life like a Mahatma Gandhi but we can take or learn the virtue which he had to be succesfull leader as we all know how his leadership helped india to get freedom.As we all know still all politians admire him till now and they are following his values in their political carrer.
Although, living in this competive world, only corporative nature does not help to be a successful leader, as we have seen the example of Nokia, who was leading mobile company in the begining of 20th century.As we all know during initial days Nokia was at it's apex,almost every person had nokia phone in their pocket with its sturdy feature and cheapest price, their was no competion for Nokia but unfortunatly they did not consider other companies as rival and today we know the result nokia existance. hence it is necessary to have to make sure that always every company or person your competior, if want to survive in this world.
Lastly, along with the competitor we need to have innovative or out of box thinking.since only hard word or being good or cooperative with everyone is not helpful to get the success or be a strong leader.We all know Tata, Infoys such companies they grew not only in thier home but worlwide as well.Those companies CEOs not only famous for their leadership quality but they are considered being as true industrialist as they not only think for themesleves but for their employees or country citizens and for the country. such people are real example of true leadership who respect each other as well as competitive also.
Therefore, any succesfull and great leader has to have competitive thinking to survive in this world.
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...spect each other as well as competitive also. Therefore, any succesfull and great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, so, still, then, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81710213777 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77956731786 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508313539192 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.062834397 60.3974514979 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.5 118.986275619 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.625 23.4991977007 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.125 5.21951772744 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104408999316 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475812617381 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375815205988 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499259451348 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386191029102 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 14.1392134831 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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