Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some parents suppose the idea that sending their toddlers to preschool is the best care for their kids while others hold the belief that grandparents would be more superior in pampering their own grandchildren. From my perspective, both viewpoints bear its own merits and demerits and I will further elaborate in this essay.
On the one hand, it is believed that children should be sent to preschool for some specific reasons. It is worth noticeable that high-qualified teachers at nursery school with their superb babysitting skills can organize countless mini games and competitions that create enjoyable atmosphere in the class. Hence, with abundant communicating opportunities and brain-storming games, toddlers being engaged in those activities will have the opportunity to optimize their early cognitive growth, which will beneficial to their comprehensive development in the long run. Scientist has proved that preschoolers would show more positive behaviours when being tutored in kindergartens in their early age.
On the other hand, it is argued by a majority of people that nursery school would not be able to give sufficient care and love to their offsprings as teachers have to pay attention to a large number of children at the same time. As a consequence, most parents entrust their offsprings to their grandparents with a view to ease their concern about security and inadequate attention. It is somewhat undeniable that grandparents with their life-long experiences would not only have the outstanding ability to look after their grandchildren but also devote all of their love and care to the infants. As a result, kids growing in such environment would reap abundant of benefits ranging from stronger family bonds, better personality and higher-satisfaction in their future life. Moreover, having family members as babysitters would also ease parent’s financial burden, especially those from the lower-class or newly-married couple with limited 2budget.
In a nutshell, I would take side with both viewpoints given that both childcare nursery and home-care are advantageous for infants considering their long-term effects
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54711246201 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12857365808 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592705167173 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0877032286 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.083333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260055167048 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973185833512 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493796803033 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158996529139 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327866818083 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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