Topic: Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nurturing and educating children is always one of the top priorities among parents around the world. Thanks to the prospection of modern society, today, there are more and more catering centers serving to take care of toddlers. Yet there have been controversies about whether parents should enroll their children in these centers or ask family members for help. This essay will shed light on both viewpoints before making the final note.
One major ground behind the rising flavor trend of letting their toddlers to their grandparents take care of is lying on financial status. In fact, unlike other kindergartens, parents have to spend a considerable amount of income on covering payments monthly. Not only study expenditure annually but also numerous extra fees which come from various services such as playground facilities or outside activities, particularly in metropolitan areas. Therefore, financial matters might become a key element discouraging low-income families decide to send their children to kindergarten. Another significant reason is that grandparents’ support will gain solid trust, reliability, and stimulation from parents, thus children-caretaker ratio can be just a fraction of that at a nursery. Due to being flesh and blood, family members will adore them unconditionally as well as monitor every step the child takes in order to assure a holistic environment for them to grow without any detriment.
On the flip side, sending children to preschools is also a more beneficial solution for more comprehensive development. Firstly, parents always raise their children with a ray of hope that their children can have a well-rounded growing experience. Hence, if parents keep their kids stay at home throughout the most significant period, kids will not achieve a memorable childhood experience as well as necessary life skills. Indeed, with standardized educational methods, these schools may foster both the physical and intellectual growth of children. For instance, children can get instant exposure to a diversity of opinions and backgrounds, thereby developing their social skills by negotiating with their peers. In addition, healthy and nutritious meals are tailored strictly following nutritionists’ advice so that children are provided with nutrient needs of different ages. As a result, preschool children may progress faster than those who are homeschooled, both psychologically and physically.
To recapitulate, even though childcare by grandparents may guarantee more attention for children and help the parents to save money, kindergarten is the right place for greater all-rounded progress of a child. It is recommended that young children should be sent to proper childcare centers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 944, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...children may progress faster than those who are homeschooled, both psychologically and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63834951456 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1409108103 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638349514563 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4277571656 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.263157895 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281634377085 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780363776398 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398244031502 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169546074924 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122073255674 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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