Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Independent of living beings as animals always become important issue in the world. Some people believe that zoo becomes one place of protection for animals Although others feel this is something which is cruel. There are valid opinions on both sides, which I will consider now.
On the one hand, opponents of its cruel zoo think that animals independen are seized by animal captivity. Therefore, this will create stress for animals and will result animals do not want to eat so that it will cause to die. Furthermore, lack of attention for health and food in times of covid , this will give bad impact for animals, one of them is the high risk of deadth and also bad nutrition which will be experienced by various rare animals at captivity.
On the other hand, through, proponents of this view say that one major benefit from zoo get protection rare animals from the extenction. Furthermore, rare animals which are placed in captivity will be treated and be breded so that it gets minimize from natural predator or rare animal hunter. Moreover, thia can make it easier Research for scientists for different kinds of animals so that the various inventions in zoology will be easy are expanded because it has provided animals as research object
Over all, it seem me believe that need existence to animals captivity at zoo because positive impact from the placement by protection is more than negative. Besides that, as long as the process of animal looking in captivity is proper and resemble wild nature that it will be able to match the comfort according to the natural habitat of the animal itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87591240876 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4786666637 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6196785624 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259976604156 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118492180769 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770920795811 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168783222911 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045381962049 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.