Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree

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...a of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject. H...
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...nd women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any cour...
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...urse depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university de...
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...ed to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough ...
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...h applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one g...
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...nder than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. ...
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...example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be ...
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...icult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males...
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...d above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university c...
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...y courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates f...
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...dates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men an...
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...d women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be succes...
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...essful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is...
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...st candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong to reject her in favour o...
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...r of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications. In conclusion, ...
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...tudents should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to ...
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...change to a selection procedure based on gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04905660377 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88678012083 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8268534643 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204827702859 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861256457728 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08297369762 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659004123674 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736374106315 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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