News coverage about violent crimes frightens people and encourages criminals. Therefore, some believe that this type of news should not be reported in newspapers or shown on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that press reporting of violence could scare people and motivate similiar criminal behaviors. I partly agree with the statement and believe that there are greater benefits associated with this movement.
It is understadable why some people advocate to the ban of ciminal act appearance on media. The first rationale is that bloody and cruel criminal scenes could terrify spectators then traumatize them deeply. This is specially true of crimes resulting in death and fighting cases. An additional point is that unscrupulous and devious acts could be stimulated by images or videos that present the procedure of law-breaking. This may lead to increasing number of offenders within societies.
However, contrary to popular belief that presentation of crimes would discourage potential criminal acts and raise awareness of the public. This is deeply rooted in the fact that people have tendency to avoid repetition of scenarios that they perceive as fallacy or against humanity. Similarly, illustration of crimes's implementation and subsequent punishments would be of great importance in order to educate young minds about self-dicipline and the negative consequences may follow immature acts. Morever, offenders with their personal information widely appears on telecommunication instruments would facilitate the investigation of responsible parties. Besides, by providing truest and most cruel insight of reality, media respondents are displaying the highest quality of reporters which is fundamental element regarding the morale and business ethic in the sector. Thus, maintaining trustfulness of society and make the world a better place.
In the light of these facts, violent evidence may have negative impacts on cartain individuals. However, it holds the key for maintaince of low crime-rate and education of young generation.
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| 2022-08-01 | Charles Le | 84 | view |
| 2022-08-01 | Charles Le | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71636363636 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09976058793 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665454545455 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7756878476 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144991110245 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417180942721 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271145525477 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838300615166 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032191938603 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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