You live in a house near a park. Recently, a lot of teenagers have been meeting in the park at night. They are very noisy.
Write an email to the local government in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
Provide information about where you live.
Explain the problem and how it affects your life.
Suggest a way to solve the problem.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this email to register a complaint about some of the local youngsters who have started meeting up in the park at night and causing a lot of noise.
I am currently living in Model Town part second, and I have a small three-bedroom apartment overlooking with a green spaces. I moved here along with my family in the fall of 2016, however, it was quite earlier but since past few months some teens are disturbing the quiet environment of our neighborhood at late night.
Due to this problem, I am unable to sleep and the whole next day remains tiring for me. Plus, the same complaints I have been hearing from other residents in my area. Besides, it has affected my lifestyle and degraded my performance at work as my job requires me to work early mornings.
While I have ask them to keep the noise down on numerous occasions but still the result has been the same. Therefore, I request you to please enforce some form of curfew on the park at night times to eliminate noisy environment from 9 PM to 6 AM.
I will appreciate your consideration on this mater.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...his email to register a complaint about some of the local youngsters who have started meeti...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rtment overlooking with a green spaces. I moved here along with my family in the ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...or me. Plus, the same complaints I have been hearing from other residents in my area. Beside...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'asked'.
Suggestion: asked
...o work early mornings. While I have ask them to keep the noise down on numerous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68141287384 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1273899197 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185447513523 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606564741303 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755660348749 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105889803738 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972356097448 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.