Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Write a letter to another friend.
You should tell
-why you enjoyed the trip
-what you are doing now
-invite him/her to visit you
Dear Manoj,
I hope you are doing great, and I can't wait to see you. I came back to town from my trip to Dubai. I have gone to meet my college friend who works in Boeing International company in Dubai.
I had a lovely vacation at my friend's residence in Dubai for two weeks where I enjoyed exploring the city. I loved the culture, music, and tradition of Muslims living in middle east countries. Apart from this, I got the opportunity to visit Burj Khalifa which is one of the highest buildings in the world. Moreover, I went for the desert safari while riding on camels which was an amazing experience.
However, after every vacation, there is work that comes into our lives and I have started coming to the office from this week since last Monday. I'm working on a project which needs to be delivered to my client next month, but we can plan for a meetup in the coming weekend.
So, I was hoping maybe you could come to my place, and we can have a couple of beers and pizza along with a good conversation about life experiences nowadays. Besides, I would like to talk more about my holiday to Dubai since you have been planning with your family a foreign vacation to the middle-east coast. My experience would be an advantage for your family vacation with your wife and I would like to give you valuable information about the trip at our next meetup.
Looking forward to seeing you on coming Saturday. Bye for now.
Warm Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manoj, I hope you are doing great, and I cant w...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., I hope you are doing great, and I cant wait to see you. I came back to town fr...
^^^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ame back to town from my trip to Dubai. I have gone to meet my college friend who...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing International company in Dubai. I had a lovely vacation at my friends res...
^
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eks where I enjoyed exploring the city. I loved the culture, music, and tradition...
^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ffice from this week since last Monday. Im working on a project which needs to be ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5303030303 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40798287841 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8621619457 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201825791043 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681663843785 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794512345119 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12067924512 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818521035556 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.