Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Should animals be used for tasting new drugs and medical procedures ?
It's a good conception to use drugs and medical products to test it on animals because it is very effective and useful for people .
This essay will discuss how can researchers test the drugs on animals and how it is useful for humans ?
In researchs indicate that researchers can use animals in testing new procedures.
It's very important to allow scientists to learn more about human biology and health also develop new medicines ; There are two opinion on the one hand it is considered morally wrong to use animals in this way solely for human benefit
On the other hand, removing animals completely from the lab would inconvenience our understanding of health and disease , and
affect on the development of new and vital treatments. Unfortunately these researchs reduce the quality of life for these animals
For example, In 2020 when the Covid - 19 appeared the scientists researched about how deal with this virus then they do some of experiments to eliminate this disease they reach to drugs to prevent this disease affect on humans but they afraid that negatively affects on humans So the scientists prepare some of animals and gave them the drugs that they made it then when they sure that's useful; appeared then when people show symptoms of the virus, it affects them positively
Almost there are some of cons about testing the drugs on animals
There are multiple types of that like
1- They don't give accurate predictions of outcomes in humans, so 94% of experiments work in animals but fail in humans.
2- It's very expensive
3- in addition to when experimenting with animals, it prevents them from food and water, and it also leaves them with injuries such as burns, wounds, and various diseases.
For example, nowadays people don't care about animal life, they do experiments on them, they don't care if the animals die or not.
To conclude
It is very important essay to know how test the drugs on animals and know how the researchers do the experiments on them .
In my opinion I see that should be more improve than yesterday because we must do all we can do to help animals to not die and increase our thinking to be the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82506527415 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57019276734 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480417754569 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.159578209 49.4020404114 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.8 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216467873762 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122783453672 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764447485123 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931561582671 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750383647253 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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