Social media is the best way to express personal views.
With the popularity and prevalence of social media, enormous people are prone to express their personal views on those platforms. A general controversy arises when people are discussing whether social media is the best channel for us to express ourselves. Some people label this type of communication the most superior choice. As far as I am concerned, I hardly concur with this belief, and what I state can be substantiated as follows.
Admittedly, social media provide us with ample opportunities to deliver our ideas and even enlarge our social circle. You can easily boast a large of friends when you make some remarks in the field of your interest topics. We can share our stories, daily life, and some thoughts related to social issues. Some social media can enable you to add some shining effects to your photos and videos to make them more appealing and intriguing to others via some high-tech and advanced software. Needless to say, the social network can help you have a comprehensive understanding of the society and world since you are granted the chance to have some interactions with foreigners and even celebrities.
However, it is also undeniable that social media may also exert negative effects on our mental and physical health. Some social media applications are equipped with diversified functions that can readily grasp your attention for a long time, causing eye strains and even other chronic illnesses. Some social media companies want you to be overly indulged in the wonderland they created, using eye-catching effects to let you invest more time and energy there. What’s more, the remarks on social media do not always have positive effects on your psychological state. Sometimes, since we are all strangers on social media, some people curse others without hesitation and always judge one person only based on their appearances instead of their opinions and viewpoints. Children are vulnerable on these virtual platforms if they express their opinions but only receive some terrible comments. Their self-confidence will be undermined, and these negative reflections will have ever-lasting effects on their real lives.
In addition, there are various channels that can also facilitate our expressions. To illustrate, we can write some editorials and critical articles in some newspapers and magazines to express ourselves. Since the process of these traditional media is more professional, we can deliver our opinions in a clearer way, and the negative feedback may not immediately have an impact on our daily life. Besides, attending some activities onsite is also a blessed opportunity for us. We can have some real interpersonal communications, which are more beneficial for us to promote our ability to think critically without offending others. For instance, only through communicating with others during some social events can I step out from the information cocoons that social media erected for me, and even have a stronger bond with others than before.
In a nutshell, with the reference to the arguments above, while social media enable us to express our ideas with ease, its disadvantages can not be overlooked and even be compensated by its peaks. We should pay more attention to communication ways that are related to our real life and get rid of the illusion that social media creates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2806.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23507462687 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84992320305 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 900.9 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7569844847 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270461344407 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842699092878 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837713406598 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174847614633 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069692103623 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 86.8835125448 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.