There will be a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport and you are not happy about it.
Write a letter to your local newspaper, explaining where you live, describing the problem and giving reasons why you do not want this development.
Dear editor of local newspaper,
I am writing this letter with regard to place a complaint against the development of the local airport in efforts to make it bigger and increase the number of flights.
Actually, I and my family live near by the airport for a long time since my parents were in their 30s to the present when they are getting on a bit. Initially, if the airport decides to enlarge their facilities and schedules to purchase surrounding properties, our house will be influenced significantly. The reason is as my parents live here almost of their life, they struck up a relationship with neighborhood and went back years to when they had moved into this house. Therefore, when the airport plans to purchase all the houses surrounding for broaden thair facilities, it will benefit them but affect negatively on us.
Furthermore, as my parents settled down in early stages of their life that is immediately after falling in love and intending to tie the knot, I didn’t have any power to decide where I live until now. Because of that, I must try to hit the airport off, although it has disturbed me all of the time with the sounds from the airplaints, let alone the sounds from the people who come to the airport days and nights.
I would much appreciate if you can collect more information directly from my neighbors and convey our messages to a new articles in next issues of your newspaper. It will help our feedbacks could be heard by the local airport managers better. I think the best way to solve the problems is replace it with a better one.
I await your prompt response.
Your faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ights. Actually, I and my family live near by the airport for a long time since my pa...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rport off, although it has disturbed me all of the time with the sounds from the airplaint...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'article'?
Suggestion: article
...ghbors and convey our messages to a new articles in next issues of your newspaper. It wi...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...k the best way to solve the problems is replace it with a better one. I await your pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6490972463 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1748371422 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28439081104 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925398909015 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535791267492 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124422073712 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522158182725 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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