we must reduce overhead here at the cafe. Instead of opening at 6 a.m. week-days, we will now open at 8 a.m. On weekends, we will only be opened from 9 a.m. until 4 p.m. The decrease in hours of operation will help save money because we wont be paying for utilities, employee wages, or other operation costs during the hours we are closed. this is the best strategy for us to save money and remain in business without having to eliminate jobs''.
This argument is flawed for a number of reasons. Primarily, it is based on the unwarranted assumption that if the the working hours are cut , it will help save money rendering the conclusion that it is the best way to save money flawed.
The argument has show no justification for the assumption that if the working hours are cut it will save more cost , as it is might be true that cutting the work hours might save some expenses the argument never said it is the only reason that is causing the establishment not to be able to save enough money money for operations. if the work hour on Monday is set to open by 8.a.m and their is no sales within the hour because many customers who use to branch the store resumes work at 7 their by giving them the time to branch on their way but now the opening hour has been shifted to few hours later makes them to patronize another store. also cutting the hour might just no be the solution that is required, what if one of the workers at the store steals from the cash registry after during work each day, no matter how many hours is cut there still wont be no changes in saving as long as the worker still works in the company.
The argument also fails to answer some question, if this approach has ever worked for anyone before or if it has worked for anyone before what is the
assurance that it will work for this particular store. also if cutting the working hour will not have adverse effect on customers patronising this store.
the argument claim without warrant cutting back time will save wages, utility , employee wages, whereas there might just be an increment in the utility been around that time and also the government might just decide to raise minimum wage and hence no money saved than before.
In conclusion, cutting back on the number of work hours might not be the only reasonable solution to save money therefore rendering the conclusion flawed,
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d on the unwarranted assumption that if the the working hours are cut , it will help sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d on the unwarranted assumption that if the the working hours are cut , it will help sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on that if the the working hours are cut , it will help save money rendering the c...
^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing hours are cut it will save more cost , as it is might be true that cutting the...
^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: money
...blishment not to be able to save enough money money for operations. if the work hour on Mon...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...save enough money money for operations. if the work hour on Monday is set to open ...
^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...r on Monday is set to open by 8.a.m and their is no sales within the hour because man...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hin the hour because many customers who use to branch the store resumes work at 7 t...
^^^
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...t now the opening hour has been shifted to few hours later makes them to patronize...
^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... makes them to patronize another store. also cutting the hour might just no be the s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... makes them to patronize another store. also cutting the hour might just no be the s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...store. also cutting the hour might just no be the solution that is required, what ...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has worked for anyone before what is the assurance that it will work for this par...
^^^
Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...it will work for this particular store. also if cutting the working hour will not h...
^^^^
Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...it will work for this particular store. also if cutting the working hour will not h...
^^^^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. also if cutting the working hour will not have adverse effect on customers pat...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t on customers patronising this store. the argument claim without warrant cutting ...
^^^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tting back time will save wages, utility , employee wages, whereas there might jus...
^^
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e only reasonable solution to save money therefore rendering the conclusion flawe...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 347.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52737752161 5.12650576532 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2793214171 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452449567723 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5856293678 57.8364921388 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.555555556 119.503703932 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5555555556 23.324526521 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.70786347227 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208686918971 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976542302488 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401827191055 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10675076892 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055713340356 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.3799401198 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.3550499002 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.5979740519 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d on the unwarranted assumption that if the the working hours are cut , it will help sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d on the unwarranted assumption that if the the working hours are cut , it will help sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on that if the the working hours are cut , it will help save money rendering the c...
^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing hours are cut it will save more cost , as it is might be true that cutting the...
^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: money
...blishment not to be able to save enough money money for operations. if the work hour on Mon...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...save enough money money for operations. if the work hour on Monday is set to open ...
^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...r on Monday is set to open by 8.a.m and their is no sales within the hour because man...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hin the hour because many customers who use to branch the store resumes work at 7 t...
^^^
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...t now the opening hour has been shifted to few hours later makes them to patronize...
^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... makes them to patronize another store. also cutting the hour might just no be the s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... makes them to patronize another store. also cutting the hour might just no be the s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...store. also cutting the hour might just no be the solution that is required, what ...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has worked for anyone before what is the assurance that it will work for this par...
^^^
Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...it will work for this particular store. also if cutting the working hour will not h...
^^^^
Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...it will work for this particular store. also if cutting the working hour will not h...
^^^^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. also if cutting the working hour will not have adverse effect on customers pat...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t on customers patronising this store. the argument claim without warrant cutting ...
^^^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tting back time will save wages, utility , employee wages, whereas there might jus...
^^
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e only reasonable solution to save money therefore rendering the conclusion flawe...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 347.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52737752161 5.12650576532 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2793214171 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452449567723 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5856293678 57.8364921388 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.555555556 119.503703932 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5555555556 23.324526521 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.70786347227 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208686918971 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976542302488 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401827191055 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10675076892 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055713340356 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.3799401198 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 48.3550499002 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.5979740519 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.