it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages
There is a belief that taking risks is necessary for people, especially both in their professional lives and personal lives. However, i am in the opinion that the advantages and disadvantages of this issue are equal.
on the one hand, several major benefits taking risks brings us. the first advantage is allowing people to have a successful career. for most people, taking risks seems to be extreme, however; it gives them the chance to challenge themselves and take them out of their comfort zone and once they prove to themselves that they can solve the problem, it will be easier for them to make significant progress in their work-life. another positive effect is that taking risks helps people meet new people. the more willing people are to walk off the beaten path, the larger their circle of friends, and the more friends and relations people have, the more experience and knowledge they could gain, not only in their professional lives but also in their daily lives. for example, people can meet people from different cultures or fly to a country where they don’t speak the language, but they also have to ensure that they are not remaining with the familiar crowd.
just as there can be benefits to taking risks, there are also disadvantages. firstly, taking risks can put you in danger. danger always appears and would become a severe problem for risk-takers, who want to make a breakthrough in their professional lives, especially if they don’t have a proper plan or a precise prediction for things that can happen in the future, taking risks may lead to destruction to their career. regardless of personal lives, taking risks could result in dangers that often occur on a daily basis. speeding, reckless driving, or committing other violations for instance are one of the most popular risks-taking which might cause injuries and cost you financially if you are held reliable.
in conclusion, I think taking risks both bring positive and negative effect on people, especially in their work- life as well as personal life
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97368421053 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59112010977 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.0535245643 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464957082949 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172954027102 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096169225183 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311666332909 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682365473865 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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