Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risk. Which do you prefer! Use specific reasons and examples to support.
people often have different habits when it comes to decide whether to try a new thing or work on things that they already are good at. In my opinion, I prefer to take the risk for new adventure. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this assay.
First, experiencing things that I have never done before make myself grow faster. By undergoing new things, I could get a chance to broaden my vision and to absorb knowledge. Fancy stuff can stimulate my mind and enable me to think about new aspects that I have never thought of before. An experience of mine is a compelling example of this. While I was in junior high school, I was too shy to meet other people. As a result, I kept myself isolated from the majority of class. However, I started to change myself and challenged myself to meet new people when I was in college. only when I stepped out of my confrot zone did I started to learn from other people. The classmates became my friends and share some cool ideas and their personal philosophy with me. Consequently, I found myself acquiring more knowledge from them than by my own.
Second, trying new things aligns with my personal goal to stay educated in order to survive in this world. We are living in a competing world and education is the only way to enhance the strength to compete with each other. Imagine if you are an employee of a big company, you might not have to try new things everyday. In fact, your own duty would probably be to work on one task repeatly day after day. There might not be an issue in a week or an year, but things could be worse after a decade if you are still working on similar things. The world might have changed then, your talent might be out of date, which is no longer appreciated by the company anymore. In the end, you would find yourself useless and unable to find any jobs.
In summary, I am in favor to try new things as I can foster my own growth to turn into an adult and stay competitive so that I will not lose the job.
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y, you might not have to try new things everyday. In fact, your own duty would probably ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...here might not be an issue in a week or an year, but things could be worse after a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, while, as to, i feel, in fact, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30225618207 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9943304476 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180724522003 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505721833346 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501392012218 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115781457177 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700184660402 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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