Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Humans are the only living beings on the Earth that has the greatest cognitive abilities than any other animal and it also passes their learnings/inventions from one generation to another. Human is broadly classified into two categories as Men and Women, who has the same cognitive skills but may differ in physical abilities. Therefore, we cannot generalise that any particular task is dedicated to only either men or women but to an individual person.
Since ages typically men were the ones who take care of the outside world while women of the household. Men were allowed to vote for the democracy while women weren't instead they were aske to support their husbands or any male-figure in their homes. But things have changed significantly now, for example the GRE exame itself, as per their data, each year 45% of the candidates among the total test takers are female while 50% are male and other 5% did not disclose their gender and the rates in the female category is increasing only. At least here we cannot differentiate in term of mental or cognitive capabilities of the men and female.
Also, in India, the largest democracy in the world has at least 48% women (545 members) in their lower house of the parliament. Today we see many women in the company's leadership are growing at such a high pace. These all facts proves that women and men are nowhere in different.
There might be few areas where only men can do or women can do, for example, only women can bring a new life on this earth while men cannot but now men can also reproduce by going some body reproductive changes. In year 2014, the possibility that a man can also bear child made headlines, though this not something you see or hear daily but we cannot generalise any particular task based on the gender or rather stereotypical any task.
Coming to the physical abilities, research studies have shown that men are physical stronger than women while women are emotionally stronger than men. This might be true but than we cannot generalise this statement because this solely depends on an individual. For example, Mary Kom, worldwide boxing champion, she has won silver medal in the olympics and gold medals in the commonwealth games while her husband isn't a boxer, while he take cares of their three children at home. So we can't really compare that being a men or women, one must be take care of household.
That being said, naturally women and men are different in physical abilities, but if one works on their ability can eaily outwit the other. However, we shouldn't be doing this for the sake of surpassing one or other but we should contribute to the society has a whole in whatever terms we are capable of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r women but to an individual person. Since ages typically men were the ones who ta...
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Suggestion: weren't
...d to vote for the democracy while women werent instead they were aske to support their...
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Message: Did you mean 'somebody'?
Suggestion: somebody
...but now men can also reproduce by going some body reproductive changes. In year 2014, the...
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Suggestion: takes
...hile her husband isnt a boxer, while he take cares of their three children at home. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... of their three children at home. So we cant really compare that being a men or wome...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
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...le in whatever terms we are capable of.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74680851064 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56651576439 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534042553191 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7997134822 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189339207239 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672543124785 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337110852577 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105114661577 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010008298661 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.