model Economy
For one upon ago, Vietnam economic is a traditional-manufacturing. High levy tax was focus on personal tax- social exclusion only . After it was collapsed and replaced by model economic, Argriculture was not backbone of economy anymore, Instead of it is knowledge-based and industry, Industry is thriving extended oppotunities. Increase output impacted significantly on current economic climate, it made economy uninterupted growth, follow it the public spending was advance. However this fast growth is also cause economy issue, for example inflation, rampant inflation is increasing. The question is how to curb inflation? There are a lot of investor who invest for a long term have not enough current capital , they need to borrow with high interest rate, lead to black ecconomy or plummet profit, the enterprise was cheating on tax, there were a lot of underclared earning. Further more will impact to economy, make weaken it, goes into recession and collapes it.
The solution is that, safegard enterprise interest, stimulate developing and allocate resources resonable to reduce inflation, control levy tax and efficent using it on public spending.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s on personal tax- social exclusion only . After it was collapsed and replaced by ...
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Line 1, column 477, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...low it the public spending was advance. However this fast growth is also cause economy...
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Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
...vance. However this fast growth is also cause economy issue, for example inflation, ...
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Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... However this fast growth is also cause economy issue, for example inflation, ra...
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Line 1, column 637, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun investor seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of investors'.
Suggestion: a lot of investors
...ion is how to curb inflation? There are a lot of investor who invest for a long term have not eno...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ong term have not enough current capital , they need to borrow with high interest ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to reduce inflation, control levy tax and efficent using it on public spending...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5197740113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27701135307 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.734463276836 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8824328627 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142636365442 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491021012374 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076350162804 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785579870663 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785579870663 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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