The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, owing to cutting edge technology most people prefer to buy items through online and that pattern graph will sky rocketing in future as well, but according to my viewpoint if physical stores or shops owner provide best quality products with reasonable prices, they can sustain their images in this competitive era.
Furthermore, there are multiple reasons behind this phenomenon, which I am going to elaborate. First and foremost, due to advancement in information technology, all generation people are using smartphones. Through phones they can browse any website, also, person can compare the prices over multiple e-commerce websites. New generations are preferably using online websites. Some platform provides equipment and clothes on trial basis, if items match with the purchaser requirement and parameter, they can keep the same or if does not match they can return it anytime.
On the other hand, some branded malls, stores, and shops are still capable to attract the customers physically. Individuals believe that we should buy the product directly from shops because they feel that, while doing trail of shoes, dresses as well as jewelries customers can feel the product and they can touch multiple items at the same time. To cite an example, last week I visited to shoes store to buy pair of shoes and slippers. while buying the shoes I observed that, the fitting of 1 shoe was not comfortable, immediately I called shopkeeper to changes the shoe and within 2-3 mintues I got another pair of shoes, which was perfectly fit on me. Such kind feasibility is not possible while purchases shoes online.
My opinion is contradict with statement that, all physical stores or shops may lead to close in future, because physical testing and peace of mind if playing vital role in our life. As human beings we first test the items, for example if we are buying clothes, we are making sure that, size, color, pattern, style should match with our body as well as it should match with shoes, sandals. To conclude, if store owners maintain the quality, provides original products and give the chance to customer to return or exchange the items, in that case online shopping trend cannot stop the physical shops and stores.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...point if physical stores or shops owner provide best quality products with reasonable prices...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'shoe'.
Suggestion: shoe
...cite an example, last week I visited to shoes store to buy pair of shoes and slippers...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...tore to buy pair of shoes and slippers. while buying the shoes I observed that, the f...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
... purchases shoes online. My opinion is contradict with statement that, all physical store...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sical stores or shops may lead to close in future, because physical testing and peace of ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05420054201 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.530898357 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588075880759 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1170515168 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.214285714 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120202886474 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413532285102 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485676296388 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726204781351 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387068154435 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...point if physical stores or shops owner provide best quality products with reasonable prices...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'shoe'.
Suggestion: shoe
...cite an example, last week I visited to shoes store to buy pair of shoes and slippers...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...tore to buy pair of shoes and slippers. while buying the shoes I observed that, the f...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
... purchases shoes online. My opinion is contradict with statement that, all physical store...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sical stores or shops may lead to close in future, because physical testing and peace of ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05420054201 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.530898357 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588075880759 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1170515168 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.214285714 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120202886474 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413532285102 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485676296388 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726204781351 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387068154435 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.